The visual design here looks much better, BUT that page doesn't even say what your service does! That should be put in a prominent tagline, like "Skyul is <this useful thing>"... whatever it actually is.
The most prominent item on the page is a search box... but I don't even know what I'm supposed to search for – apparently search terms? Why? Your page doesn't tell me anything I need to know.
And the main call to action – "Start an account today" – is smaller than the search button... and even below the fold on my screen.
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The visual design here looks much better, BUT that page doesn't even say what your service does! That should be put in a prominent tagline, like "Skyul is <this useful thing>"... whatever it actually is.
The most prominent item on the page is a search box... but I don't even know what I'm supposed to search for – apparently search terms? Why? Your page doesn't tell me anything I need to know.
And the main call to action – "Start an account today" – is smaller than the search button... and even below the fold on my screen.
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