I will definitely consider the criticism on tone. However, there can be no slack for English as a second language. They are marketing in English to a market of writers. In any vertical of creatives, you really must outdo your market. They need to get sharp quickly.
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I really hate this kind of comments. It wouldn't hurt to be a little constructive while criticising someone's work.
What's not constructive about it? He's literally giving sentence by sentence grammatical feedback...I'd be pretty happy to get advice like that.
Don't want to derail offtopic here, but it's really just in the delivery. It came off a tiny bit pretentious to me.
Normally, yes, but their first language doesn't seem to be English. Might be reason enough to temper things a bit.
I will definitely consider the criticism on tone. However, there can be no slack for English as a second language. They are marketing in English to a market of writers. In any vertical of creatives, you really must outdo your market. They need to get sharp quickly.
Agree, criticism is good, but constructive delivery is better both for the criticized and the community at large.