Comment on Ask HN: I didn't launch early enough, I'm struggling and could use some advice.parentComments−helen84200013yNo problem, you're welcome.I see you made a few changes! :) I think at $9 per e-mail that's pretty sweet. I can see myself becoming a customer of yours soon!I've got a few other suggestions but the main ones were -1)In your bullets you've got a few run on lines with words orphaned which interrupts the flow reading the great features.2)Your sign up buttons should be (without a doubt) GREEN!3)The "No credit card required!" can be just text underneath so your button can have bigger text & stand out.Hope that helps :)
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No problem, you're welcome.
I see you made a few changes! :) I think at $9 per e-mail that's pretty sweet. I can see myself becoming a customer of yours soon!
I've got a few other suggestions but the main ones were -
1)In your bullets you've got a few run on lines with words orphaned which interrupts the flow reading the great features.
2)Your sign up buttons should be (without a doubt) GREEN!
3)The "No credit card required!" can be just text underneath so your button can have bigger text & stand out.
Hope that helps :)