Thank you Helen. Some great feedback there. You're point "Your landing page should make people say 'hell yes' in 1 big headline, 3 bullet points and 2 small screenshots. A real hit between the eyes." resonated poignantly with me. I think you hit the nail on the head. It wasn't obvious at first what we were selling.
I've done some redesigning on our 'marketing' pages to better illustrate what we are selling.
Thank you for taking the time to give your thoughts!
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Thank you Helen. Some great feedback there. You're point "Your landing page should make people say 'hell yes' in 1 big headline, 3 bullet points and 2 small screenshots. A real hit between the eyes." resonated poignantly with me. I think you hit the nail on the head. It wasn't obvious at first what we were selling.
I've done some redesigning on our 'marketing' pages to better illustrate what we are selling.
Thank you for taking the time to give your thoughts!
No problem, you're welcome.
I see you made a few changes! :) I think at $9 per e-mail that's pretty sweet. I can see myself becoming a customer of yours soon!
I've got a few other suggestions but the main ones were -
1)In your bullets you've got a few run on lines with words orphaned which interrupts the flow reading the great features.
2)Your sign up buttons should be (without a doubt) GREEN!
3)The "No credit card required!" can be just text underneath so your button can have bigger text & stand out.
Hope that helps :)