To be slightly more constructive.. though I'm not sure what exactly you are planning to do, making coupons more useful, or less of a pain to deal with, is a good thing, right?
It's just that overselling something with too grand language can really backfire, it does on me in this case; combined with no real hard info it feels like giving your email address for a cat in the bag. All I know about that cat is that it likes marketing and coupons.
Why not just say "here's what we intend to do and how we'll do it, this is how you can stay informed / in touch"?
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To be slightly more constructive.. though I'm not sure what exactly you are planning to do, making coupons more useful, or less of a pain to deal with, is a good thing, right?
It's just that overselling something with too grand language can really backfire, it does on me in this case; combined with no real hard info it feels like giving your email address for a cat in the bag. All I know about that cat is that it likes marketing and coupons.
Why not just say "here's what we intend to do and how we'll do it, this is how you can stay informed / in touch"?