I think you broke the text at multiple locations where you did your last round of changes (duplicate words, broken grammar). Also you missed another copy of "GBA".
Should be all fixed now. This is quite a tricky text to translate with all the in-jokes and it's absolutely dripping with sarcasm in German, hard to pull that off in English (both English and German are not my native tongues).
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Thank you, updated.
I do believe exfiltration is a real word but I've changed it.
See for instance: http://whatis.techtarget.com/definition/data-exfiltration-da...
I think you broke the text at multiple locations where you did your last round of changes (duplicate words, broken grammar). Also you missed another copy of "GBA".
Should be all fixed now. This is quite a tricky text to translate with all the in-jokes and it's absolutely dripping with sarcasm in German, hard to pull that off in English (both English and German are not my native tongues).