It looks like Staply solves a problem, but I don't know what that problem is. In your footer next to the copyright you have "We want to see a world where information is never lost or forgotten." -- is this the problem you're solving? Keeping track of information?
The screenshot hints at a sort of shared folder space for placing things for design review and comments.
I would suggest adding a section above "Take a new approach" that tells me the problem I already have before telling me how Staply fixes it.
Where you say "Private" and mention SSL, I think this is really bare-bones privacy. That's more like "Secure" to me. Privacy implies that you wouldn't sell my data, that you would store it encrypted on your servers, and that your servers are secure. It's more than just the transport layer.
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It looks like Staply solves a problem, but I don't know what that problem is. In your footer next to the copyright you have "We want to see a world where information is never lost or forgotten." -- is this the problem you're solving? Keeping track of information?
The screenshot hints at a sort of shared folder space for placing things for design review and comments.
I would suggest adding a section above "Take a new approach" that tells me the problem I already have before telling me how Staply fixes it.
Where you say "Private" and mention SSL, I think this is really bare-bones privacy. That's more like "Secure" to me. Privacy implies that you wouldn't sell my data, that you would store it encrypted on your servers, and that your servers are secure. It's more than just the transport layer.
Thank you for your suggestions. Especially about the privacy.