Update the headline - "FEEDBACK
RIGHT ON THE SITE"
Leave feedback? Receive feedback? So I can do what?
On the subhead -
What does taking the guesswork out of the feedback loop actually mean? What will I be able to do once I take the guesswork out of the feedback loop? Make better design decisions?
A lot of the copy is too vague to be helpful.
"THE RIGHT TOOL FOR THE JOB"
What job? What are the pain points your tool helps alleviate? From the site, I'm guessing it's to find out the specific elements that are stopping visitors from converting or further engaging with the site? Poor design is expensive. A lot of people know what people do on a website, not lot of people understand why they do it. Sell up your solution as solving for the "why."
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Update the headline - "FEEDBACK RIGHT ON THE SITE"
Leave feedback? Receive feedback? So I can do what?
On the subhead - What does taking the guesswork out of the feedback loop actually mean? What will I be able to do once I take the guesswork out of the feedback loop? Make better design decisions?
A lot of the copy is too vague to be helpful.
"THE RIGHT TOOL FOR THE JOB"
What job? What are the pain points your tool helps alleviate? From the site, I'm guessing it's to find out the specific elements that are stopping visitors from converting or further engaging with the site? Poor design is expensive. A lot of people know what people do on a website, not lot of people understand why they do it. Sell up your solution as solving for the "why."