2) I can't tell if you have a product that you are trying to sell or even what the industry is you are targeting. I doubt you will get useful advice without specifics.
Whatever it is you haven't given it long yet (4 months?), what results were you expecting by this point?
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1) Use paragraphs.
2) I can't tell if you have a product that you are trying to sell or even what the industry is you are targeting. I doubt you will get useful advice without specifics.
Whatever it is you haven't given it long yet (4 months?), what results were you expecting by this point?