I'm no developer (actually an interactive copywriter), but I know enough about Ruby to hold a decent conversation.
I agree with timmah - you adequately convey what Devver does, but you're not really giving enough of a value proposition. It just needs a little more "sizzle" to show them why they really NEED to use Devver.
I'm sure some more coder-types will chime in here, but overall, I think it describes the service very well. Good luck!
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Hey, Ben -
I'm no developer (actually an interactive copywriter), but I know enough about Ruby to hold a decent conversation.
I agree with timmah - you adequately convey what Devver does, but you're not really giving enough of a value proposition. It just needs a little more "sizzle" to show them why they really NEED to use Devver.
I'm sure some more coder-types will chime in here, but overall, I think it describes the service very well. Good luck!
Kipp
Awesome feedback. We'll work on adding more info to really make the value proposition clear.