Comment on Review our launching soon page please.Comments−sgaither13yThe page looks nice and you have a clear flow and call to action...but the copy could use tightening up all around. For example, the subhead:New, exciting way of doing online coursesSounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression−rameshnidOP13yThanks a lot. We are based out of India and most of us can speak english but have terrible grammar. But I will get it corrected.
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The page looks nice and you have a clear flow and call to action...but the copy could use tightening up all around. For example, the subhead:
Sounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"
And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"
There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression
Thanks a lot. We are based out of India and most of us can speak english but have terrible grammar. But I will get it corrected.