I just spent the last couple of minutes digging through links trying to understand what your product is and does. I would consider finding a simpler way of explaining your product in one sentence.
The blurb above and the link to your other HN post does not clearly describe your product or visions. It reads as a collection of thoughts.
The closest thing you have is this: Marquee is an easy to use, flexible platform that’s perfect for telling stories.
It looks like a kind of hybrid content management / blogging / editorial / tumblr platform. Is that correct?
Having said all of that, the site itself looks stunning. Without signing up, I have no doubt that it delivers the professional user experience that you advertise in your video guide. Focus on driving the business growth now and reap your rewards :)
I think you are explaining your product with fairy dust and pixies at the moment whereas more useful businessy type words may convey your value better.
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I just spent the last couple of minutes digging through links trying to understand what your product is and does. I would consider finding a simpler way of explaining your product in one sentence.
The blurb above and the link to your other HN post does not clearly describe your product or visions. It reads as a collection of thoughts.
The closest thing you have is this: Marquee is an easy to use, flexible platform that’s perfect for telling stories.
It looks like a kind of hybrid content management / blogging / editorial / tumblr platform. Is that correct?
Having said all of that, the site itself looks stunning. Without signing up, I have no doubt that it delivers the professional user experience that you advertise in your video guide. Focus on driving the business growth now and reap your rewards :)
I agree.
I think you are explaining your product with fairy dust and pixies at the moment whereas more useful businessy type words may convey your value better.