1) I would break the page up into multiple pages. Keep the homepage simple and let the user click ancillary links if they need to.
2) It says the printing is done in the founders basement, but shows a picture of a printing warehouse. Is your basement a printing warehouse? Honestly not sure here.
3) The textures are distracting, I'd tone them down.
4) A blurred picture of the Golden Gate Bridge is cliche, I'd try something else.
5) The 'What is Pantastic' doesn't really say anything. Statements like "Delivered to your doorstep" (assumed), and #1 quality around (a relative statement with no comparison) don't progress the sale.
I second the textures. I think the single page is fine though.
The FAQs are hard to read because the line height is the same for everything.
Agree with another comment that says the end product needs to be shown. I don't care how you create the product or what printer you use, just that the end product looks great.
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Great start here, I like what you've done.
Some feedback for improvement:
1) I would break the page up into multiple pages. Keep the homepage simple and let the user click ancillary links if they need to.
2) It says the printing is done in the founders basement, but shows a picture of a printing warehouse. Is your basement a printing warehouse? Honestly not sure here.
3) The textures are distracting, I'd tone them down.
4) A blurred picture of the Golden Gate Bridge is cliche, I'd try something else.
5) The 'What is Pantastic' doesn't really say anything. Statements like "Delivered to your doorstep" (assumed), and #1 quality around (a relative statement with no comparison) don't progress the sale.
I second the textures. I think the single page is fine though.
The FAQs are hard to read because the line height is the same for everything.
Agree with another comment that says the end product needs to be shown. I don't care how you create the product or what printer you use, just that the end product looks great.
Great idea and good luck.
Thanks for the feedback!