A couple thoughts:

I really like the layout of the blog. It's nice looking and clean.

The other comments about choosing the wrong tool are apt, but it's also true that this is a part of the payments business. Stripe can choose to do the sorts of holds and escrows these folks are looking for, or not, but I do think Stripe is particularly easy to integrate.

I think this piece is really trying to articulate the grouptalent business model to developers and it comes off pretty well to my mind.