Get some editing help on the copy - it's got some seriously awkward phrasing. Also, I've read it three times, and I'm still not sure what it is that your company will do aside from "reinventing the world of coupons". If your value proposition is that users won't have to "pay for a coupon to receive a discount", you need some more explaining - I don't know what that means, but I'm pretty sure I haven't done it (and hence wouldn't be motivated to sign up).
Vaguely related: how should I be pronouncing the name? Is it two words ("vou-share"), or a creative spelling of voucher to put the word "share" in there?
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Get some editing help on the copy - it's got some seriously awkward phrasing. Also, I've read it three times, and I'm still not sure what it is that your company will do aside from "reinventing the world of coupons". If your value proposition is that users won't have to "pay for a coupon to receive a discount", you need some more explaining - I don't know what that means, but I'm pretty sure I haven't done it (and hence wouldn't be motivated to sign up).
Vaguely related: how should I be pronouncing the name? Is it two words ("vou-share"), or a creative spelling of voucher to put the word "share" in there?
>I don't know what that means, but I'm pretty sure I haven't done it
I suspect it's a daily deals site that doesn't charge. Groupon that's free for consumers.
I completely agree with your remarks on the copy, it doesn't read like it was written by a native English speaker. Should be an easy fix.