Comment on Startups, your landing page sucksparentComments−orangethirty13yPlus:- They don't link from the blog to the site from their logo. Marketing 101 here, folks.- Here is their pitch:We allow startups to get the right exposure to media while bloggers are able to filter the stories they get.Huh?- Thier tagline:The matchmaking platform for startups and bloggersUnless the business is aiming at selling to bloggers, this line is not quite clear.- I have to click on an image of a button to find out you have not launched and are just asking for my email. Double huh?It is obvious there has not been a test run in this landing page. Which reminds me of rule #1 of landing page: Continually Test Everything.Good luck to the Press42 team.−abarreraOP13yHey, fair point, so, I'm a huge believer of positive feedback, so what are your suggestions? What parts don't you understand? How would you rephrase it? Very open to suggestions :)
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- They don't link from the blog to the site from their logo. Marketing 101 here, folks.
- Here is their pitch:
We allow startups to get the right exposure to media while bloggers are able to filter the stories they get.
Huh?
- Thier tagline:
The matchmaking platform for startups and bloggers
Unless the business is aiming at selling to bloggers, this line is not quite clear.
- I have to click on an image of a button to find out you have not launched and are just asking for my email. Double huh?
It is obvious there has not been a test run in this landing page. Which reminds me of rule #1 of landing page: Continually Test Everything.
Good luck to the Press42 team.
Hey, fair point, so, I'm a huge believer of positive feedback, so what are your suggestions? What parts don't you understand? How would you rephrase it? Very open to suggestions :)