Skip to content

Comment on Neural Boidsparent

Comments

Sentence fragment. Sentence fragment. Sentence fragment. That's not X, that's Y.

I can't even call this LLM smell at this point it's a stench.

If I had to characterize it, most minimally-prompted LLM prose has two issues:

- the writing always feels self-important. I would feel a lot more receptive if I perceived that the writer came from a place of humility

- like you pointed out, overuse of writing techniques that work best if used sparingly. Sentence fragments can be effective for emphasizing a point, but if you use it in every. Single. paragraph, the effect is gone. It’s very amateurish.

AboutSource Built by g1lg1l

Hackerly is an independent reader for Hacker News, built on the public HN API. Not affiliated with Y Combinator.