Thanks for sharing your insight. Wouldn't hurt from a proofread. There are some typos / wrong words, that detract from the sense of authority lent by the article. Eg:
"It's clear that we this structure" --> with
"with out those protections in place" --> without
"Investors would be best to limit their exposer to losses beyond their investment" --> exposure
There might have been others, I had to go back and skim to summarize for you.
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Thanks for sharing your insight. Wouldn't hurt from a proofread. There are some typos / wrong words, that detract from the sense of authority lent by the article. Eg:
"It's clear that we this structure" --> with
"with out those protections in place" --> without
"Investors would be best to limit their exposer to losses beyond their investment" --> exposure
There might have been others, I had to go back and skim to summarize for you.
Thank you! No matter how many times I read things over I managed to leave a few behind. I will make those edits shortly.