I'm sure I will come back and post a most substantiated comment later after I continue to go through your website, however, as an immediate feedback, I still don't know exactly what it is that you provide.
My startup is a Holiday Rental platform, which aggregates rental listings, and consolidates them from dozens of sites, pulls them in to a central platform then churns them out to other agent sites... (I have no intention of hijacking your thread I just wanted to provide background information that would show that I am somewhat familiar with the market (albeit it not domestic rentals)).
Anyway, from looking at several pages now, I'm still struggling to know exactly how you can help! You need to summarise things better. Try and summarise your copy more, and also reduce all of the walls of text.
The first think I notice when I browse most of your pages is that you don't have a unified call to action. You should be screaming out to me, and trying to funnel me down some predefined path that you want me to go down...
Also having "Products" and "Services" is a little redundant. Take me as an example, I want to know what it is that you do immediately.. you should have a single product which you can explain succinctly and then tell me about all of the additional features that it has whcih will make my life even easier.
And "Services" sounds like you do tasks rather than provide a product.
As a tip, your comment in this thread provides greater insight into your product than your website does.
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I'm sure I will come back and post a most substantiated comment later after I continue to go through your website, however, as an immediate feedback, I still don't know exactly what it is that you provide.
My startup is a Holiday Rental platform, which aggregates rental listings, and consolidates them from dozens of sites, pulls them in to a central platform then churns them out to other agent sites... (I have no intention of hijacking your thread I just wanted to provide background information that would show that I am somewhat familiar with the market (albeit it not domestic rentals)).
Anyway, from looking at several pages now, I'm still struggling to know exactly how you can help! You need to summarise things better. Try and summarise your copy more, and also reduce all of the walls of text.
The first think I notice when I browse most of your pages is that you don't have a unified call to action. You should be screaming out to me, and trying to funnel me down some predefined path that you want me to go down...
Also having "Products" and "Services" is a little redundant. Take me as an example, I want to know what it is that you do immediately.. you should have a single product which you can explain succinctly and then tell me about all of the additional features that it has whcih will make my life even easier.
And "Services" sounds like you do tasks rather than provide a product.
As a tip, your comment in this thread provides greater insight into your product than your website does.
Thank you for the review. We are definitely going to be making some improvements based upon your review. What is the name of your website?