Comment on Ask HN: could you rate my first landing page?Comments−tylerwl14yCongrats on diving in and creating something!I would remove the Learn More button. You've got useful information on that page, so just take it and put it directly below your signup box.Also, I'm guessing English isn't your first language based on some minor issues like:Or invite new potential suppliers to see what is their best price -> Or invite potential suppliers to submit their best priceMake Savings -> Save Time and Money−viandanteOP14yThanks, I really enjoyed creating this.Thanks also for the comment about the text, I was not considering that. Too deep into the technicalities :)
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Congrats on diving in and creating something!
I would remove the Learn More button. You've got useful information on that page, so just take it and put it directly below your signup box.
Also, I'm guessing English isn't your first language based on some minor issues like:
Or invite new potential suppliers to see what is their best price -> Or invite potential suppliers to submit their best price
Make Savings -> Save Time and Money
Thanks, I really enjoyed creating this.
Thanks also for the comment about the text, I was not considering that. Too deep into the technicalities :)