Comment on Show HN: A gift giving service for men (built in 10 days and generating revenue)Comments−jawns14yRecommendation: Change "Schedule gifts to be sent to the females in your life" to "Schedule gifts to be sent to the women in your life.""Females" sounds like cop-speak.−gcl214yOr even more softer/friendlier sounding "Schedule gifts for women" (gifts are usually sent or given and can be assumed as so, and it's assumed they are for women in your life and not random women in the universe).−spontaneusOP14yI'm a/b testing a few of these. I'll add your suggestions to the mix.
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Recommendation: Change "Schedule gifts to be sent to the females in your life" to "Schedule gifts to be sent to the women in your life."
"Females" sounds like cop-speak.
Or even more softer/friendlier sounding "Schedule gifts for women" (gifts are usually sent or given and can be assumed as so, and it's assumed they are for women in your life and not random women in the universe).
I'm a/b testing a few of these. I'll add your suggestions to the mix.