I skimmed it (and am familiar with the tech background). Minus the memes (not a fan) it seems fine.
Related possibly helpful, I get the feeling these days we write for 2 distinct set of eyes on the internet: those looking at a large screen and those who digest articles on a 3x4 inch screen. For example, one can see your diagrams and read the text discussing them on a pc at the same time.
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I skimmed it (and am familiar with the tech background). Minus the memes (not a fan) it seems fine.
Related possibly helpful, I get the feeling these days we write for 2 distinct set of eyes on the internet: those looking at a large screen and those who digest articles on a 3x4 inch screen. For example, one can see your diagrams and read the text discussing them on a pc at the same time.