You added fluff! Concision is important. Here’s how I would put this:
Separately, we tested overall overlap and similarities in spatial structuring among Indigenous language families and bear genetic groups using analysis of similarities (ANOSIM) and multivariate analysis of variance (MANOVA).
That said, I found it quite readable, though I would have liked more inline math/diagrams/maps.
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You added fluff! Concision is important. Here’s how I would put this:
That said, I found it quite readable, though I would have liked more inline math/diagrams/maps.
You threw away the hypothesis!
That was in the prior paragraph, no need to restate.