Comment on Ask HN: Review my bootstrapped startup, QuantonomicsComments−sab215yHere's a small change you can make to engage users:Tell them benefits not features. Users will like that more. Make all the bullet points speak for how awesome your product is!−sab215yPS: Also you need to choose who your target market is and appeal to them by probably writing it - For wallstreet veterans, new age tech ninjas, etc (I made these target demographics up- you could do it much better)
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Here's a small change you can make to engage users:
Tell them benefits not features. Users will like that more. Make all the bullet points speak for how awesome your product is!
PS: Also you need to choose who your target market is and appeal to them by probably writing it - For wallstreet veterans, new age tech ninjas, etc (I made these target demographics up- you could do it much better)