Do you think if you wrote it slower it would be a little less weird?
Eel is the weirdest thing to eat with strangers. Her biology was like a movie. These things are brilliant in a Delillo like way but the flow is too fast. Also making a butterfly thing?
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Do you think if you wrote it slower it would be a little less weird?
Eel is the weirdest thing to eat with strangers. Her biology was like a movie. These things are brilliant in a Delillo like way but the flow is too fast. Also making a butterfly thing?
Absolutely.
As mentioned below, this is the first draft release. I loved some of the absurd things and re-rinsed when it got too bizarre.
Could not bring myself to read it. Thank for the excerpt :)