- Did you steal your header image from somewhere? It looks like you took a screenshot and managed to leave a fragment of the scroll bar in it...
- Why are there blog posts completely unrelated to cars in the front? In fact, they are so far from cars that they somewhat alienate me (because they are about shoes, sex, and/or being bald.)
- Links shouldn't shrink the way they do when you hover over them
- I might deserve a sports car, but I don't know if you deserve my personal information
- I think your entire page seems to have an a case of identity confusion; it isn't sure what it wants to be and it reflects that very obviously
-learnt photoshop; created them from scratch; finally 6 months of learning paid off; I am proud of them; I did some shrinking and cutting when I was porting from them the older versions of the website - I will take a look at the scrollbar issue.
-the ideal customer profile is 35-50 year old men going through midlife crisis therefore focused on women and cars.
-will look at the links
-"I deserve" Hmm. Interesting. I was trying imagine the thoughts in the users head. They are not giving me info for nothing - it is to get a car for less with little to no work. They benefit that 1 minute may convert into $1k or more in savings since Internet quotes are less than floor prices.
-I agree - this is my fourth mockup so ... I am iterating. I am going try a number of suggestions that I recently got.
I appreciate your feedback. It helps me understand where I am not making this easy for the user: a person who wants to buy sports car asap and wants to save a little money without much work.
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A couple of things...
- Did you steal your header image from somewhere? It looks like you took a screenshot and managed to leave a fragment of the scroll bar in it...
- Why are there blog posts completely unrelated to cars in the front? In fact, they are so far from cars that they somewhat alienate me (because they are about shoes, sex, and/or being bald.)
- Links shouldn't shrink the way they do when you hover over them
- I might deserve a sports car, but I don't know if you deserve my personal information
- I think your entire page seems to have an a case of identity confusion; it isn't sure what it wants to be and it reflects that very obviously
Hope that helps.
-learnt photoshop; created them from scratch; finally 6 months of learning paid off; I am proud of them; I did some shrinking and cutting when I was porting from them the older versions of the website - I will take a look at the scrollbar issue.
-the ideal customer profile is 35-50 year old men going through midlife crisis therefore focused on women and cars.
-will look at the links
-"I deserve" Hmm. Interesting. I was trying imagine the thoughts in the users head. They are not giving me info for nothing - it is to get a car for less with little to no work. They benefit that 1 minute may convert into $1k or more in savings since Internet quotes are less than floor prices.
-I agree - this is my fourth mockup so ... I am iterating. I am going try a number of suggestions that I recently got.
I appreciate your feedback. It helps me understand where I am not making this easy for the user: a person who wants to buy sports car asap and wants to save a little money without much work.