As said, just a quick hack with no claims to perfection, but imho an improvement over the original.
Left-align vs justify might be worth retrying, justify won in my 5-second comparison. You're right about en dash; I left the copy entirely untouched because I didn't want to spend more than a few minutes on the whole thing.
While you're at it, the signup-button could use some love, too...
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As said, just a quick hack with no claims to perfection, but imho an improvement over the original.
Left-align vs justify might be worth retrying, justify won in my 5-second comparison. You're right about en dash; I left the copy entirely untouched because I didn't want to spend more than a few minutes on the whole thing.
While you're at it, the signup-button could use some love, too...