I'm not a recruiter, but my opinion is that 'experience' should mean 'commercial experience'. By saying you've got seven years (4 commercial) you look like you're trying to bump up your figures.
Page 3 is ridiculous. Shorten your borders and margins and get it onto 2 pages.
Overuse of bullets for my liking, esp when really you're putting paragraphs in. Bullets are for <5 word points ideally. Nested bullets are always ugly.
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I'm not a recruiter, but my opinion is that 'experience' should mean 'commercial experience'. By saying you've got seven years (4 commercial) you look like you're trying to bump up your figures.
Page 3 is ridiculous. Shorten your borders and margins and get it onto 2 pages.
Overuse of bullets for my liking, esp when really you're putting paragraphs in. Bullets are for <5 word points ideally. Nested bullets are always ugly.
Tell people what they care about. Eg:
> Livenumber, a blackberry application...
Nobody cares that it's called Livenumber. Say:
> A blackberry application...
It looks a bit wall-of-texty.
Just my opinion though, don't take it for gospel!
The way I see it if you're thinking it, others looking at my C.V will too. I agree with every point you make and will make the changes accordingly.
Thanks very much for your feedback!