1. You need a better design, the logo seems kind of stupid for me. The whole design take me back to 2000/2002.
2. Why load all these scripts. I mean, I'm in the home page, you shouldn't load validate.js, form.js... Also lot of commented HTML, this only add unnecessary loads to your page. Also avoid inline CSS.
3. You need a good copywriter or may be some copy writing lessons since you just started. Someone already mentioned it.
1. 2000: Y2K fear passes, Bush is elected as president through Supreme Court Decision, 2001- 9/11 attacks, Beginning of war on Terror, 2002-2003: Beginning of War in Iraq. Yuck... Bad memories. You need a beer too.
2. As I stated, the site is still in development (as you stated, there's still a lot of work on the design). I'll clean it up.
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1. You need a better design, the logo seems kind of stupid for me. The whole design take me back to 2000/2002.
2. Why load all these scripts. I mean, I'm in the home page, you shouldn't load validate.js, form.js... Also lot of commented HTML, this only add unnecessary loads to your page. Also avoid inline CSS.
3. You need a good copywriter or may be some copy writing lessons since you just started. Someone already mentioned it.
1. 2000: Y2K fear passes, Bush is elected as president through Supreme Court Decision, 2001- 9/11 attacks, Beginning of war on Terror, 2002-2003: Beginning of War in Iraq. Yuck... Bad memories. You need a beer too.
2. As I stated, the site is still in development (as you stated, there's still a lot of work on the design). I'll clean it up.