Comment on “It turns out”parentComments−Angostura16yI think Safire would probably have suggested that you used "died" rather than "passed on". No?−rtperson16yHe would also have suggested a comma after "sadly," so that it's obvious that it's the writer's comment, rather than a modifier on the way Safire died.
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I think Safire would probably have suggested that you used "died" rather than "passed on". No?
He would also have suggested a comma after "sadly," so that it's obvious that it's the writer's comment, rather than a modifier on the way Safire died.