Comment on Show HN: I recently launched a new cloud hosting companyComments−michaelmior10ySounds interesting, but you should have someone edit your copy. Below is a sample of some issues I found.We are the first to do this.Have cheap prices? Not really a selling a point.We care about not only the privacy"the" is unnecessary herewe guarantee that our interface is top of the notchThe expression is just "top notch"so that you could easily spin up and deploy new servers"can" easily spin upevery month you'll receive discounts and other propWhat is a "prop"?
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Sounds interesting, but you should have someone edit your copy. Below is a sample of some issues I found.
Have cheap prices? Not really a selling a point.
"the" is unnecessary here
The expression is just "top notch"
"can" easily spin up
What is a "prop"?