The core idea was good, but it went on for way, way too long, and the religious theme got old long before.
Again, I wish the writing hadn't been so bad (that I gave up halfway through), as I really do suspect the author had something interesting to say ...
... I just never got to hear it, because I couldn't stand waiting for them to get through admiring the sound of their own voice, so I could actually learn what it was.
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I found this writing particularly grating.
Yea I had to stop reading after a paragraph or two
The core idea was good, but it went on for way, way too long, and the religious theme got old long before.
Again, I wish the writing hadn't been so bad (that I gave up halfway through), as I really do suspect the author had something interesting to say ...
... I just never got to hear it, because I couldn't stand waiting for them to get through admiring the sound of their own voice, so I could actually learn what it was.