review my landing pagedaily-social.com 2 pointslevicampbell14 years ago3 commentsSaveHideCopy link On HNComments−leebossio14yI like the background, but I'm with Kmarima. Should be just a couple of lines of copy.Should answer: who you are, what you do, and why you're better than everyone else in a sentence (or two at most)−aantthony14yI get an alert in Safari on Mac: 'Floatbox does not support quirks mode. Page needs to have a valid doctype declaration.'−kmarima14yToo verbose
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I like the background, but I'm with Kmarima. Should be just a couple of lines of copy.
Should answer: who you are, what you do, and why you're better than everyone else in a sentence (or two at most)
I get an alert in Safari on Mac: 'Floatbox does not support quirks mode. Page needs to have a valid doctype declaration.'
Too verbose