The eZ430-Chronos is a highly integrated, wearable wireless development system that comes in a sports watch. It may be used as a reference platform for watch systems, a personal display for personal area networks, as a wireless sensor node for remote data collection, or simply as a watch.
My favorite sentence: "Since we don’t know the students are that are getting these boards we decided we needed to do some assembly and, because electronics bought in bulk are so cheap we threw in some LEDs, resistors, wires and a breadboard."
Why are writing skills so abysmal? I didn't go through any special writing classes, yet I manage to form relatively brilliant sentences compared to my peers. And this, yes is more than jsut a typo too. The sentence is just structured poorly from the onset, has commas in the wrong places and is missing commas.
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much better:
The eZ430-Chronos is a highly integrated, wearable wireless development system that comes in a sports watch. It may be used as a reference platform for watch systems, a personal display for personal area networks, as a wireless sensor node for remote data collection, or simply as a watch.
http://processors.wiki.ti.com/index.php/EZ430-Chronos
My favorite sentence: "Since we don’t know the students are that are getting these boards we decided we needed to do some assembly and, because electronics bought in bulk are so cheap we threw in some LEDs, resistors, wires and a breadboard."
Why are writing skills so abysmal? I didn't go through any special writing classes, yet I manage to form relatively brilliant sentences compared to my peers. And this, yes is more than jsut a typo too. The sentence is just structured poorly from the onset, has commas in the wrong places and is missing commas.
My favorite sentence: "I manage to form relatively brilliant sentences compared to my peers."
I bet your peers absolutely love working with you.